Today most people attending university is for this three fallowing reasons to get a good job, to have knowledge and have experience in society life.
In our society if you don’t have a good job, you will live without anything. High education will lead you get a good job or not. I think it an important thing to get a good job in the future.
Attending a university is to have knowledge. To broaden our horizon, we can have plenty of information in the university. You can learn a lot from the professors who have more specialties knowledge.
Experience is essential to success in your work in the future. In the university you will meet much kind of friends and teachers. Some of them are a good example to let you learn from them but others are not. You need to differentiate them by yourself.
Attending university is necessary for you in now a day. You will learn a lot from the university. Not only your mind but view will increase.
Hi, Mike.
回覆刪除It's good that you have your own ideas about why attending university. But I think there are some grammatical mistakes including the tense and the use of the plural. I suggest that you can check your articles again and again before you publish your articles. Besides, you can type them by using Microsoft Office. In this doing, you can reduce the likelihood of making mistakes on spelling words. Though your articles are good, you can make them better.
Annie.
Hi Mike
回覆刪除I love your ideals toward this essay. I may suggest you try to form a more complete organization.
Hello Mike!
回覆刪除I'm Nana. NIce to meet you.
I think your article is very clear to understand because you include your own ideas.
I like your article.
I hope you keep working on it.
Thanks and have nice day.
Nana
Hi Mike
回覆刪除I think what you thought of this topic is clear but you might look through the whole writing and you might find some grammar errors.
You do a good job. Keep going.
Edward
Hi Mike
回覆刪除I suggest you to write more content of your essay. And you have good ideas to talk about what are you saying. Goodoodoodoodoodoodjob
hi mike,
回覆刪除Though your article is very short, most of the sence have connect to hte point. i think, there are some words useage that need to be correct, such as:" High education will lead you get a good job or not." the sentanece structure should have to be correct. Also, the word"now a day"is not separate in to three words it should be"nowadays". nit bad!! keep going!!
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