Hi my name is Mike and I come from a little town called Wu-Chi located in Taichung. I love nature a lot because the sea is just near my house. Jogging is one of my favorite sport and so does swim. When I have free tome I like to read some book not only novel but magazine. I like make friends and meet people. I never been aboard so I really want to take a look at :D
Hi~ Mike,
回覆刪除Your self introduction is interesting. And, I also found we have many similarity. I like nature, and I like going to seaside, too. And my favorite sports is swimming.
But there is some grammatical errors in this paragraph including the wrong use of the person verb, or some tense mistakes.
If you can correct them, ths paragraph will surely be better.
by Caroline
HI Mike
回覆刪除After reading your introduction, I think you are an easy-going person.
Correct the small mistake and this article may be better.
Rick
Hi Mike
回覆刪除I'm Peggy!!! XD
Nice to meet you.
Your introduction is so short and it is so easy to read.
I like it but maybe you can correct the small mistake and this article may be better.
hey~~~welcome to my blog!!